Tues. 5/1/18-Thurs. 5/3/18
Essay first draft due Friday May 4th in PowerSchool
(AT THE LATEST BY 7:30am Monday May 7th in Google Classroom AND turnitin.com)
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class ID: 18026369
Key: English
You essay needs to have a
green similarity score:
- green (one matching word - 24% similarity index)
- yellow (25-49% similarity)
- orange (50-74% similarity)
- red (75-100% similarity)
You should be coming to the end of your essay, which means you'll soon be writing the CONCLUSION. Be sure your conclusion:
- Restates and emphasizes your thesis/claim
- Provides the "so what?" -- explains why this argument is relevant to you and the world around you
Goal: Work on adding evidence to your essay. Focus on correctly quoting, paraphrasing and summarizing the words of others with citations.
Body Paragraphs
Before you move on to your body paragraphs, reread your intro and make sure you:
- Made it very clear whether you agree or disagree with the quote you chose
- Related the quote to extreme sports and risk taking behavior
Now it's time to prove your claim. Consider what subclaims (reasons) you will present in your essay. You will likely need at least one paragraph to present each subclaim. You will also need evidence to support each subclaim. Your evidence will come from the extreme sports articles we read in class.
The evidence that you pull from the articles must be quoted. For example:
- Direct quotation: In “Extreme Sports Not About Risk-taking: Study,”Dr. Brymer found that people who participate in extreme sports have an image of “risk takers and adrenaline junkies”. He found this really isn’t true.
The only evidence that can be paraphrased or summarized is the Everest Documentary.
1 BODY PARAGRAPH MUST INCLUDE A COUNTERARGUMENT/DEVIL'S ADVOCATE:
As you continue to write the body of your essay, make sure you include an opposing viewpoint/counterargument. Remember, this is the opposite side of the argument, what someone who disagrees with you might say. Below are some sentence frames to help you introduce an opposing viewpoint and counterargument:
- Some people may argue...
- On the other hand, __________ believes that...
Most importantly, once you bring up an opposing view, you MUST refute it (prove it wrong). Below are some frames to help you refute the opposing view:
- However, they are incorrect because...
- This is a valid point, but...
Objections and Counter-Arguments: One of the paragraphs in your essay should start like this:
Introducing objections: Opposing viewpoints:
- Some people may say that _______________.
- Critics might argue that __________________.
- I know some people will think _________________.
- There are people who would disagree because _______________.
- Those who have never tried ____________ might (think/say/argue) that ________________.
Addressing opposing viewpoints with counter arguments:
- These critics haven't considered ______________________.
- When you know more about ________________...
- Doubters should see how____________________...
- To say that _____________ is an exaggeration of_________________.
- While it is true that ___________________, it does not necessarily mean that________________.